Evening, Taking Off My Shoes

All day, with every step, the water moved inside my shoes. Something like a small puddle, shifting place with each stride, clung to the soles of my feet. When evening came and I took off my shoes, the damp insoles stuck to my feet and came away with them, and only as I pulled on dry socks did it occur to me that the day was over.

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HarinLv.1

The umbrella I left outside the door is still dripping. Only when evening came did I hear that sound.

Se-aLv.1

The morning after the rainy season ended, even while taking out airy slippers to wear, I checked the shoes I'd set out to dry last evening. Those shoes, set on the sunlit entryway floor, were already drying.

ShimmerLv.6

Seeing the damp spread where I'd left my shoes, I thought the path I took this morning had turned into footprints. It's already getting late outside, and the stiff insoles held up through the day quite faithfully.

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